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Post by mcdumplin on Jan 1, 2007 19:28:37 GMT
My Secret Garden
Welcome to my secret garden, please feel free to pick the flowers. Wander through its shady glades as you while away the hours. What you see is all of me. There is nothing I shall hide. You now possess the only key so please, stroll deep inside!
McDumplin
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Post by territalks on Jan 11, 2007 10:01:05 GMT
Hi McDumpling
I enjoyed this poem well done. TerriTalks003
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Post by wbyeast on Jan 12, 2007 15:48:11 GMT
That's a really good short verse- no pretence to floral language, just straight and well controlled. More please!
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Post by Lou Briccant on Feb 1, 2007 14:29:33 GMT
Hi McDumplin. Straight and to the point, well done.
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