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Post by Monica N'tbayou-Love on Oct 26, 2006 16:08:42 GMT
I’m worried about my sixteen-year-old son His choice of a mate’s a peculiar one.
Her warmth and her cleanliness can’t be denied And her floral perfume makes her smell like a bride. But she can be quite empty; she’s nothing to say And she’s frigid and hard when her warmth drains away.
Though she isn’t the type that’s attractive to all I’m afraid he’s entranced by her; deep in her thrall. He spends hours in her company, night after night; For a boy of that age it just doesn’t seem right.
He goes into her room, turns the key, locks the door, And I hear the soft rustling as clothes meet the floor. I can guess at the ecstatic look on his face As he starts to prepare for their loving embrace.
Soon I know he’ll slip into her, warm, wet and deep, And then when he is done she will lull him to sleep. Then it’s back to his room; he won’t bother to dress, And it’s me in the morning who clears up the mess.
I thought he’d grow out of what must be a phase – And spend his spare time in more usual ways – But no, he’s besotted, and here’s the worst thing… This morning I saw she was wearing his ring!
I know it’s his business to choose his own path…. But I’m worried my son is engaged to the bath!
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Post by Kelly Sigh on Oct 28, 2006 11:01:51 GMT
LOL - excellent, Bevnats!
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Post by Monica N'tbayou-Love on Oct 29, 2006 14:28:26 GMT
Thanks Kelly - for a while there I thought it might be too ruuuuuude! <g>
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swampy
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Post by swampy on Nov 8, 2006 21:52:40 GMT
rude from a tog Never , it all in your mind I liked it a lot
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swampy
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Post by swampy on Nov 8, 2006 21:52:55 GMT
rude from a tog Never , it all in your mind I liked it a lot
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Post by Mandy Lifeboats on Nov 16, 2006 6:54:13 GMT
Excellent!!
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Post by Gayle Force on Nov 27, 2006 16:52:37 GMT
So clever, I was starting to feel quite shocked and then realised what was going on! Really enjoyed it - keep writing!
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Post by Ena BumDance on Nov 28, 2006 18:19:02 GMT
It is beautiful. With an unexpected smile.
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Post by territalks on Jan 11, 2007 13:43:53 GMT
Hi Monica How I giggled at this one, I love poems like this, very funny and so amusing. As has been said TOGs rude never! territalks003
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Post by vgrumpy on Jan 12, 2007 1:11:50 GMT
Reminds me of when I was 14!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by singingyorkie on Jan 12, 2007 17:42:01 GMT
How clever, like this a lot. Do another one.
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Post by Lou Briccant on Feb 1, 2007 14:32:38 GMT
Reminds me of when I was 14!!!!!!!!!!!! Not short on memory then.
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Post by plymman on Feb 4, 2007 1:46:20 GMT
Yes you really had me going there, I recently heard a similar one about a turkey......... but I forgot it. I say, I recently heard a similar one about a turkey but I .....................I'll get me coat
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Post by Nuala Bowtitt on Feb 17, 2007 20:49:36 GMT
Awwhhh....( Gives big sigh) Wish I could write like this..... Wonderful. So clever.
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