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Post by ickle on Nov 30, 2006 17:30:03 GMT
They say silence is golden! I say it is barbed wire. It is a dagger in my heart that Pierces deeper than skin. It kills me slowly, stabbing the goddess within. It razors my heart in two And leaves me longing for word from you. They say no news is good! I say it stuns me to submission, Unable to walk or talk, Or think, I freely make admission. They say absence make the heart grow fond! I say a void unfilled now grows within. A black hole in my soul Where once we formed a bond. No word, no call, no reason ~ No farewell my lovely, No sorry for your heartache. Just an empty silence passes time. When darkness finds you in your lonely room Will you reach to call my number To lift you from your gloom? And will I be there waiting To hear the voice I love? Or will this heart so broken ignore The cooing of my dove? They say silence is golden But barbed wire will it be, That slices me to emptiness And keeps your love from me.
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Post by adamzappel on Dec 21, 2006 10:32:30 GMT
Powerful stuff! You can feel the hurt.
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Post by Nutella on Dec 28, 2006 23:07:36 GMT
Wonderful. Thank you for sharing it.
Did you write it - and experience the emotion?
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Post by territalks on Jan 11, 2007 10:04:58 GMT
I agree with the others, very emotional and thought prevoking. Well written. TerriTalks003
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Post by Monica N'tbayou-Love on Jan 27, 2007 12:53:02 GMT
powerful stuff!
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Post by elfinsafety on Jan 29, 2007 15:25:33 GMT
Wow what a powerful poem. Made a hardfaced H&S man feel human
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Post by Lou Briccant on Jan 29, 2007 20:24:41 GMT
Silence usually means you are on your own and being on your own is never golden. Powerful words.
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